The Halloween Contest
What a dirty trick. Leggy chose a cobweb
competition!
Last year, Melba chose a cook-off and used a
magic potion. Her cauldron of chili was more spooktakular than my acorn stewed
beans.
The year before, my perfect selection of a
tree bark gnaw-off backfired when an out-of-town beaver showed up and
embarrassed us all.
But how is a squirrel supposed to concoct a
cobweb?
Luckily, I’m clever. And Farmer Everett won’t
miss the 892 ears of corn I needed to ahem...borrow.
I nibbled and I nibbled, weaved and strung. By
morning, not even Leggy could compete with my COB WEB!
Very clever cob web! Love it. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Nancy!
DeleteOhhhh I love word play! Great job my friend!! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThank u friend! Good luck to you too!
DeleteLove the word play! I would love to see the cob web!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rose!
DeleteCute and clever. A cobweb made of corn-silk, brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary Ann - I was actually thinking a contraption of corn cobs, but corn silk would make a nice web too!
DeleteCorn silk versus Spider silk. Love it.
ReplyDeleteSo neat that many readers are inferring cornsilk - I was just imagining a ramshackle mess of corn cobs and yarn. Thanks for reading!
DeleteIs this strings of corn kernels instead of popcorn? Oh no, now I see it is the corn cob itself he strung together. That is one competitive squirrel!! Well done and good luck!
ReplyDeleteYes! The cobs themselves!
DeleteLove the clever idea of how squirrel makes a cobweb. Good luck.
ReplyDeleteHa! I liked the Cob Web! Well done both of you. Good luck.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
DeleteHahahahaha! Great play on words.
ReplyDeleteI love your smart squirrel and the cob web! Too funny!
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading and for the kind words Jolene!
DeleteLove the image of a cob web! And darn! them squirrels are smart!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sue!!
DeleteThis time of year, I always wonder why a Corn Maze isn't called a Maize Maze. So, COB WEB, FTW! I admire how you managed to fit a complete story arc in so few words, while incorporating splendid sensory details, the "rule of three," and a sharp-witted, hard-working hero. Glad he didn't bite off more than he could chew!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for your thoughtful comment, Anne!
DeleteCob web! Love it! I'm a nurse too, btw. :)
ReplyDeleteGo nurses! <3 Thanks Melissa
DeleteClever! Great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kelly
DeleteVery original story. I enjoyed it. Good luck.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading!
DeleteSteph this is hilarious! I laughed at ahem...borrowš¤£ love how creative you MC was, those strings in the corn arr very cobweb-like
ReplyDeleteSincerely,
Kaitlyn Sanchez
Thank you so much! Your comment put a smile on my face
DeleteSmart squirrel! Loved this one.
ReplyDeleteThanks Eleanor!
DeleteClever! Love the wordplay and creative premise.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
DeleteGreat play on words! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jilanne!
DeleteSuch a clever concept
ReplyDeleteThank you Kalee
DeleteVery clever play on words!
ReplyDeleteThanks Monica
DeleteLove your determined squirrel, and his COB web! So clever. Best of luck to you both in the contests!
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